The wildlife at our house are an amazingly creative bunch of critters!! The following post features a story written by 9 year old Fish as a school assignment. He received a perfect grade of 5 points and a teacher comment: WOW! WHAT A GREAT STORY! Hope you enjoy it!
Once at the zoo the zookeepers go see the monkeys, but they left the door open. All the animals are out because of the monkeys. Then snap snap, an alligator is behind me. I run in a zig zag motion. Boom, a time machine blows up. Then a bunch of ancient animals appear. One of them is a 20,000,000 year old crocodile. It chases other animals and catches a monkey and eats it. It then catches a puss moth catepiller but does not eat it because the caterpiller sprays its acid at the crocodile. Suddenly the monkeys run for their lives because a giant eagle is trying to catch them and eats 3. I go to catch the eagle and go with a tranquilizer gun. It disappears back to it's time with the monkeys. So I start shooting the ancient animals which go back to their time but it doesn't work. It eats the rest of the monkeys. It goes to it's time. Then I get all the animals back to their cages except the monkeys, because 3 of them went back in time and the rest were eaten. I had saved the day at the zoo. Then I decided to leave the zoo because it was time to leave. Bye everybody, I shouted.
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